"Water Therapy" - Aaliyan Zahid

Hey guys I wrote a new song. Here is the draft of this new song. As someone put it, "As actors you are required to deliver in a short amount of time". In my case, it's um.. Maybe a singer-songwriter-blogger-amateur poet-would be PhD theoritician. So enjoy and here it goes:
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[Intro]
Moon creating gravity, bending the ocean
Waves falling and rising
Tides evaporating and raining
Seven color spectrum forming, here above the clouds

[Pre-Chorus]
Girls shouting and exciting,
Monkeys dancing, FED working
Money printed, Girls wasted
Minds bended, worlds merged
Fashion again, monkeys again
Sex, money and fame, human evolved
Tastes like the New World, the brink of destruction
Watch that eye, it won't happen

Water Therapy, Water Therapy
Strange when you hold me, it's all not gone
Sounds like me and river,
I hold the breadth, I exercise
Down the hill, up the tides
I feel the radio, and the girls laughing

Water Therapy, Water Therapy
Water... Therapy, Water... Therapy.

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That's it. To be honest, I know this sounds self-regard but I thought this one was awesome I mean better than anything before.